a blunder, the unemployed
my ancestor occupied;
now we're talking.
When walking home just now
I saw an old woman cutting
carnations, a simple weight
attached at the bonfire
of her irregular rattle,
and thought of you.
I said once, if I love you,
we'll fight, and I meant it.
This morning began with a flood.
While my body was heavy with the weight
of the unwanted gift, you
were in the garden, said,
a weed is anything
in the wrong place.
I'm worried but I'll wait it out.
mgb 11042010
Here I took 3 sources (not sure what they were) and took some words, some lines and rearranged them to make my own poem. There are a few of my own things here too but it feels like mine anyway.
3 comments:
a weed is anything
in the wrong place
i love that
I like this
the anon was me, ryan
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